Asis
To Defeat a God
No comment.
If I may. the flow of the word balloons is a bit off. It makes you read the last panel’s after you read the middle due to the layout and where your eyes move across the page. If you don’t mind: http://chrisoatley.com/comic-balloons-comic-layout/ http://www.makingcomics.com/2014/04/14/comic-review-checklist-part-1-flow/ For future ref to help make pages easier to read. :3
Is it me or is Mau looking a bit older? Also, Rike trying to drip poison on/manipulate Mau… pfft >_<
Why do I feel like the use of his name there is damning
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Twila Lin
If I may. the flow of the word balloons is a bit off. It makes you read the last panel’s after you read the middle due to the layout and where your eyes move across the page. If you don’t mind:
http://chrisoatley.com/comic-balloons-comic-layout/
http://www.makingcomics.com/2014/04/14/comic-review-checklist-part-1-flow/
For future ref to help make pages easier to read. :3
Ana C J Carvalho
Is it me or is Mau looking a bit older?
Also, Rike trying to drip poison on/manipulate Mau… pfft >_<
Caprine
Why do I feel like the use of his name there is damning