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This page a internal debate with myself. I feel like I set the reader up for a story about killing a god,  by page 36 it's over, and you didn't even get to see the epic fight. I had some half formed plan to actually have a larger portion of the prologue focus on this, but considering it doesn't directly involve the main cast, it felt excessive. I left it at this. Perhaps later on, some side story will tackle this part of the story in more detail, but the main story, just didn't need it.

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