First page post, welcome to the show, hello.
I'm already off to a rocky start, as I'm already feeling less than confident in some of the early scripting for this story. That's not to say I don't like it, just that I don't feel the start has much of a hook. Hopefully those coming back to read this as I put work into it, enjoy it and can forgive that this isn't some epic action comic at the start.
I don't doubt there will be a lot of questions about the world setting, I'll answer what I can in comments, the rest should become more clear as the story continues on, I DID manage the writing to slowly guide readers into the world without a massive, ugly wall of text describing some past war and how races came to be.
That's a pet peeve of mine in comics, massive walls of text that start a fantasy story. Ugly shit that is.
Your comic always had such great quality art, starting even from the very beginning! That’s not something you always see xD ‘Tis how I know people are born to do things…
No matter how much I want to go back and improve on earlier pages, every time I hear someone say things like this makes me happy. us artists can be so overcritical of older work, heh.
2 thoughts on “Page 1”
Elijah
Your comic always had such great quality art, starting even from the very beginning! That’s not something you always see xD ‘Tis how I know people are born to do things…
Skulldog
No matter how much I want to go back and improve on earlier pages, every time I hear someone say things like this makes me happy. us artists can be so overcritical of older work, heh.