So Zero joins the cast. No one but Devin can see him, and NO they don't have internal dialogue, Devin is very much talking out loud to something only he can see. A wonderful combination. This was the first, single paneled pages I did in the comic, and sadly, I was hoping it was the last, but it wasn't..
4 thoughts on “Chapter 1 – Page 34”
ShAd0wC4t
Found a typo mistake in one of the bubbles :] “Law” should be “lawn”.
Skulldog
I can’t thank people enough for catching my embarrassingly silly mistakes, types and grammar wise. ;D I got the first fiew touched up, and will do the rest with the next update.
jessings3
The word ‘all’ is repeated.
Skulldog
Thanks for the catch! Just fixed the page. :)