Okay, first off, sorry for the downer of a chapter end. REALLY SORRY, but that's how it was originally written, and I wanted to stick with it. Next, this is exactly where I stopped in the story of the original version of BRINK. I never wrote anymore beyond this scene and page. Where we go from here is a complete blank slate, it took me awhile to get the next few bits thumbnailed.
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Jim Faindel
Wow, I dont want to imagine what kind of paper work these guys have to do, it seems to be they’re biggest fear.