Part of me is wanting to cut this page, it's not really needed. I just wanted to draw Kirin. Originally the dream had purpose in the comic, but with the re-write it no longer does. My freakiest dreams always about being in some underground labyrinth or sewer system. I can never see what's beyond the open doorways, but I go in anyway. Why did I keep it? Maybe I can still work some meaning in later.
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Hope you do keep it! I really like the unicorn at the end. Bright, and flowy. I hope you can work it into the story cause it would be a shame if you pulled it! D: